1. The strengths of my partners essay were that she did a very good job of using descriptions to describe what she was feeling towards her grandma. I really felt like I knew her grandma because she did such a good job of describing how she was.
2. To improve this narrative, she can use more descriptions when she was saying what she did with her grandma.
3. Erica didn't have any literary devices in this narrative, so she will have to add those in to give mroe depth to the story.
4. The catchiest part of the story was in the end when she was saying how inspiring her grandma was, and how much she influenced her life.
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